🎨 Your Challenge, Should You Choose to Accept it ...
Try this: Read a conversation out loud and record it on a phone or computer. When you've finished recording, listen to it with your manuscript close at hand. As you go, pause the recording and revise any phrasing that doesn't sound quite right.
It's surprising what we can hear that we may not be able to see on the page! We'd love to hear your stories about what you noticed when you listened to your scene in the discussion area.